20 pages • 40 minutes read
Theodore RoethkeA modern alternative to SparkNotes and CliffsNotes, SuperSummary offers high-quality Study Guides with detailed chapter summaries and analysis of major themes, characters, and more.
The form here is regular and predictable; the poem is a regimented, careful structure. Reflecting Roethke’s study and his appreciation of traditional poetic forms, “My Papa’s Waltz” is a ballad form: The story is delivered in rhymed quatrains (or four-line stanzas) in which the first and third lines rhyme and the second and fourth lines rhyme. This form recalls centuries earlier, when minstrels would travel town to town and sing these ballads, using the rhyme scheme as a memory tool. Indeed, Roethke’s poem has been transcribed as a folk song and as a waltz.
The irony here is that this carefully structured form shares an account of a night in which a drunken father unleashes a quiet chaos in his own kitchen in compelling his hesitant young son to dance with him. The tidy form emphasizes the conflict central to understanding the psychological impact of this memory on the boy, now a grown adult. The boy understands order; he understands a kitchen with the pans on the shelf and his father, when sober, going about his day. This night, however, the child is introduced to a world of unsettling chaos even as he clings to the idea of reassuring stability and order, suggested here by his desperate clinging to his father’s shirt even as he is whirled about the kitchen. That sense of emerging chaos is underscored structurally in how seldom the lines have an end-stop punctation, a poetic device known as enjambment. The lines within each stanza flow into each other, defying the line break, creating that sense of dizzying momentum of the dancing itself. The form thus uses structure to quietly create chaos and upend the stability and reassurance of form itself.
The meter itself creates the feeling of the father stumbling his way through the dance; the meter is both regular, like the carefully tapped patterning of a traditional waltz, and at odd times decidedly irregular. Most of the lines are set in iambic trimeter: The line has three sets of two beats each, predictably working an unstressed syllable against a stressed syllable. That meter is appropriate because, after all, the classic waltz timing is three beats.
However, that careful meter is then overturned with a line that suddenly, without warning or logic, introduces a fourth beat. It is a clumsy line that inevitably makes the reader stumble just enough to create hesitancy and rhythmic distress, uncertain how to handle the extra beat, like the father and son improvising a waltz. Listen to the second stanza:
We romped until the pans (regular, easy three beats)
Slid from the kitchen shelf; (regular, easy three beats)
My mother’s countenance (now, we stumble, trying to fit the unwieldy word “countenance” into the established meter)
Could not unfrown itself. (back to regular, easy three beats)
In this way the poem recreates the limited perception of the boy and his helplessness as he tries to follow his father’s graceless steps—some sense of logic and order to what is otherwise the unpredictable anarchy of his papa’s waltz.
The poem captures the dynamic of looking back and the difficult gift of awareness it offers. The adult, the poet, understands in retrospect what he did not understand as a child. The poem is an ironic interior monologue, with the poet addressing his presumably dead father through the limited awareness of himself as a child. The night described in the poem, despite its innocent feeling, reveals to the adult the exact dimensions of a father he cannot bring himself to love easily or completely even after his death.
The poet actually addresses his father: The second-person “you” introduces the idea of a dialogue with the figure. It is an unsettling direct address frame because the father, of course, never responds and thus the “you” points to the reader, involving us in this complicated dynamic. The poem shares the limited perception of the child struggling to keep up with his father’s erratic dance moves. The voice grows accusatory as the adult sees the implications of that night and how the father’s apparently childish antics revealed a pattern of behavior that has scarred the adult, a pattern that includes his father’s boorish behavior, his unhealthy alcohol use, his insistence of manipulating others, his unexamined strategy to use his physical stature to get his way, and, preeminently his insensitivity to the impact of his intimidating actions on his young, impressionable son.
Plus, gain access to 8,800+ more expert-written Study Guides.
Including features: