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Margaret Atwood

[you fit into me]

Margaret AtwoodFiction | Poem | Adult | Published in 1971

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Literary Devices

Form and Meter

Margaret Atwood’s poem, “[you fit into me],” is a concise free-verse poem of four lines, meaning there are no consistent patterns of rhyme, rhythm, or meter throughout the entirety of the piece. The poem is divided into two stanzas, or groupings of lines, each two lines in length. This mirroring of stanza length is the only formal element in the poem’s construction. This choice reflects both the harmony and tension that exists in the poem. Atwood uses the form to speak to and amplify the content of the poem, exposing how something that is seemingly symmetrical and harmonious can, in an instant, crumble, and stand in violent opposition. Atwood even goes so far as to fit the title of the poem inside two square brackets, adding another layer of double meaning to the piece. The title can appear to fit perfectly inside these brackets, mirroring the ideals of Stanza 1, or else, feel trapped like that of Stanza 2 (see: Poem Analysis).

Each stanza is unified by a lack of capitalization and punctuation. The absence of these common conventions adds a sense of unease to the poem; readers do not know what to expect next without common, predictable patterns such as rhyme, rhythm, meter, capitalization, and punctuation. The poem, therefore, feels loose and conversational, adding significant shock value to the final twist.

Juxtaposition

The overarching theme of love is juxtaposed with the startling image of the fish hook piercing an open eye and the pain of that experience. Juxtaposition is the placement of two or more elements side-by-side in order to expose their differences or shocking similarities. Atwood uses juxtaposition to expose the fine line that exists between love and violence. This literary device is responsible for much of the poem’s impact, transforming “[you fit into me]” from a simple love poem into an ominous warning.

Simile

Stanzas 1 and 2 are connected by one, extended simile. A simile is a figure of speech in which two objects are directly compared, usually including the words “like” or “as” within the comparison. Atwood compares romantic compatibility to the fit of a hook-and-eye closure, writing, “you fit into me / like a hook into an eye” (Lines 1-2). She extends this simile into Stanza 2, clarifying that it is “a fish hook / an open eye” (Lines 3-4). Both lines in the first stanza are longer than those in the second stanza, stretching out the initial simile so that the turn of the poem has more impact. Atwood does not dance around the reveal of the fish hook and open eye, but instead, uses mainly monosyllabic words to reveal the striking, sinister image. This comparison alters the audience’s perception of romantic connection, revealing that love is not predestined, it is oftentimes perilous.

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